Diskussion:Ciberbullying

Very good work. You have 9,5 points out of 10.

If you want to improve still further:

(1) change from seminar-work style to encyclopedia style. like in es.wikipedia. Do not use "I" or "we" or "have come to the conclusion that" etc.; make it more neutral.

(2) some more foreign sources would not hurt .

Congratulations, Sebstian

30-01-16

OK, Sandra Alvarez Ramirez and Lorena Hervas Burger: you have reached 10 points now. You do not have to work on your article any longer. For the purposes of our seminar, this is as far as you can get. If you want to continue to improve your article - or if you would like to write more articles just for fun - please feel free to do so.

Thanks, congratulations, Sebastian